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Old 10-18-04, 09:57 PM   #9
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Voted For: Mr.Freeze

iight this is gonna have ta go to Mr.Freeze

Mr.- You Just Came Harder.Your Structure Was A Lil Stretched Homie But The Flow Was Good And The Vocab. You came back with some nice wordplay and nice punches.
Just Fix Your Structure iight..

Lil- Your Verse wasnt bad it was actually good but even tho your structure beat his he just came harder all togeather. But you keep elevatin and try to make the structure all the same lenght dont make the lines different lengths.

Overall vote- MR.Freeze
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