Voted For: Snap-Shock

BigPappa:
k you did elevate you have nice flow and stucture but you still need help wit punches swearing and shit aint punchlines lol...playing with words is punches try that maybe talk to L.I he knows alot for a 14 year old...but ya you had some nice lines but you need alot work on complex rhyme theames with vocabulary n shit...

Snap-Shock:
nice verse not bad for a newb nicly played on the punches they hit tight and you had aight stucture better then big pappas but yours was better lined out if you no what i mean...you had nice vocabulary liked your verse wasent half bad as i said before i think....but yes jsut a little work needed on your punches and wordplay and you will be dope...

VOTE: Snap-Shock

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