Voted For: B.I.Detained

Vote - B.I.Detained
Reason:
Better punches and wittier concepts...Premanition had alot of ok punches...but the explanations just completely ruined a majority of them for me...fact is...you explained every bar...yay...you came personal...but you had to explain it...that insults the reader....B.I. had a better overall verse...and was at least able to throw a punch that hit...

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