Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

U Thinkin U Defeatin And Completin Battles, But U Clearly Don Get Da Concept
U Defeation Me Is Uncommon Like "Crips" Walkin Through Da Blood Sets
weak opener...
Misconceptions, Deceptions, Deficits And Collections Of Lessons
Im Enhanced, So My Flow Make U Try Hard Like Gay People Flexin
barely a punch...
U Losin Dis Battle, And I Cant Tell A Lie Like Abe Lincoln
U Always Come Up Short And Tiny Like Premature And Deformed Children
best punch in ya verse an still weak...
Ive Seen U've Anialited Rooks B4, But Dawg Im A Different Version
U Gon Lose, And It Gon B Hard To Adjust Like SEX And Livin Virgins
self-glorified/no punch...

Notorious: Im not hatin on you dawg, I give honest feed and sometimes that means its gunna hurt ppl. First off, you gotta try staying away from self-glorifying yourself, your not here to freestyle, your in a battle...instead of making yourself look good with words, try making yourself look good by making your opponent look stupid <--best advice youll ever get right there. Also, I noticed you tried usin lots of multies in areas, which is a good thing, except in this case cause half of that shit didnt even make sence, you were just basically rhyming words together. If your gunna use multies, make sure they make sence when put together and also make sure the words arent super long or else it will throw off your flow and entire verse.

Notorious Verses overall verse = 4/10

Digestive System full of newbs, This kid's Vet Illiterate, Early Retirement I consider-it..
Career Status, Only Battles newbs, Never Even Looked at a vet, And he Admitted-it
alright opener...
Battlin Me? Dumb Decision, Wisemen? Please, Kid Makes more Mistakes then Blind mathamaticians..
Swingin punchlines Viciously, Punches Cause More Impact Then Head On Collisions
self-glorified/not feelin this line...
Spit Ill scripts, multiple Papercuts to the head, Cause Your brain to Disfunction..
I Spit that Godly Flow, Your Far From Great, Check The Sig,Angelz Of Deztruktion
not a punch...
This bitch is Bait For Vets, Your Whole Career You've Been Trapped on Fish-Hooks..
Punches Cause Flames, Try and tell Your mom That's the reason for your house to cook.. (burn Down)
weak but not bad...
Put this kid in a Mental Institution I think He's See'in Ghosts..
Thats the angelz callin', Oh yeah, God Told Me there's no place for you In heaven,
...................So When You Die Imma Laugh as You roast..
also not a punch/weak closer...

Kontroverzey: First off, I didnt like the fact that you made your text smaller, just keep it how it automatically comes out, larger font is easy to read and makes it look better. You used a lot of pointless lines and the others were self glorified. Tryt stayin away from those dawg, just like I said in Notoriouses feedback...but you actually did a small bit of research and creativity, that link in your verse was a good idea for a punch. Also you threw a few personals that hit him. watch your line lengths cause 2 of your bars were thrown right off cause they were too long. Especially that closer...wasnt feelin it, waaaaay too long dawg. shorten shit up and leave the font alone.

Kontroverzey overall verse = 5/10

Final Thought: This was an overall pretty weak battle but it was obvious that kontroverzey took it. he had harder personals, more creative ideas, and even a few funny lines. Notorious' verse had consistant vocab. Other than that his punches were weaker, no personals, didnt use the line maximum and multies were blown outta proportion cause they didnt have anything to do with his verse. Good job Kon, this was my hounest vote and im sure the final votes will also agree with my feedback/vote. Payce, and props to both, no hate.