You can't beat me tell you mom to eat me
thats me bro that you're hearing on the c.d.
i'm two steps ahead thats why you cant see me
And I spread like water thats why you wanna be me
defeat me; NO define a true purpose
cuz in this rap game you move ahead like a tortoise
I know you wanna hurt this; put down your props
the proposition is i'll hit you in the chops
if you cross my path you'll be dealing with the master
fly like this don't miss you silly bastard
you may be quick but i am much faster
you the one that sux dick to pay your landlord
& your town has you labeled as a man whore
enuff debate, can't wait to hear your answer
you're known by your peeps to practice santeria
on the mic i'll chew you up & spit you out like diahrria


JK, don't take that serious I thought your song was cool & i'm just trying to show what I can do since i am also new here> I've got no advice for you just keep workin on it I think you're probably better then me but I want to hear you audio so I can further evaluate.. i'll give it 4 stars **** as good as i've givin anybody so far. If I you was 5 star youd have no business on this site thats when you can start selling records. Good luck man this is a good way to get noticed or form a band and improve on your emcee-ing