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Old 10-19-04, 02:01 AM   #7
Parallel
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Voted For: streetryda

im gonna have to go honest here...

Streetryda:
k you had dope flow...nicely lined up stucture nicly attepted punches... not bad but just to let you know swearing aint punches lol there just sayin your gay or something lol...just stating that out..kinda weak vocabulary tho...coulda been better...try workin on complex words n rhymes...but nun the less you won...

The Unknown (uk):
im not haten on you dawg...but you have no punches worth anything andyou ahve so short of lines your stucture is fucked...your lines are so short hell you cant have good punches or wordplay and stop saying nigga every damn line even if you are black shut up your wack as fuck rappper but not bad for a newb tho...but need lots of work dawg...

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