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Old 10-19-04, 02:03 AM   #43
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Voted For: emind aka eclipz

not really a great battle here... (far from it)... but yeah... LX let me down.... he did so much better when he battled me when I first joined the site... the lines here were all simple-minded... no complexity... no punches or personals... wordplay was also lacking here... no multies... this really looked like a beginner's verse... hopefully this was just a bad day for you...


Emind... not that much better butya shyt was held together a little bit tighter. ALL of ya lines rhymed (see LX's closer)... a lot of wack concepts here... structure was stretched all to hell but it didn't hurt you as much being that LX never really hit you with anything... minimal wordplay... an ok attempt at multies... work on getting ya thoughts together and connecting ya punches... i really got bored reading this battle... there were no outstanding lines between the 2 verses... just my opinion... RTF and vote on my battles... thx in advance
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