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Old 10-19-04, 02:15 AM   #3
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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Verse 1 - SmokaJoka
Flow is ok...lyrics are pretty nice, you sound out of breath for you whole verse tho....presence is ok

Verse 2 - Dank
Dank sounds the same as always..gets kinda boring after a while, but I know he won't change his delivery...lyrics are decent..dark...maybe could doo some more conplex rhyming

Verse 3 - Rapidfire
Ok...pretty average...flow seems iffy at times. lyrics are average, nothing great....delievry is pretty good

Hook - Rapidfire
Hook is meh..not really feelin it

Overall a decent track you 3...some parts could be improved...like lyrics and such...keep at it
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