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Old 07-21-02, 12:45 AM   #3
Calisto
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One part pugnacious
so she's quick with the palms
^^ lovin that line, I loved the concept of this it was wonderfully put together & flowed real nicely off tha tounge. The only thing that i didn't like was the whole "Blacc" woman thing, it coulda been real woman instead because I have to admit that's what deterred me from reading it the first time I noticed it, the blueprints title was pure genious though, props for that. I'd like to think that I may have some parts of whatever woman inspired this peice (whether she be dream or real) but I know that I'm not all it is actually a peice that I would aspire to in a daily sence, I think that this was an overall wonderful peice & I will definatly read all yo work in the future because you have very well defined skillz! peace boo
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