Voted For: streetryda

Street ryda got this.....

You had bettter flow and better Punches......
I like your structure with this ... i was nice and easy to read through..... same for theflow...

You had some alright wordplay.....
Some nice multis i saw in there....

Dflow...

You werent that hot..... I didnt like your structure... it was terrible... i could barley understand it....
and your wordplay was alright...... and your lines were too short.......

And the way you stayed on one ending sound for every word..... I HATE THAT>>
that bugs me cuz you cant really say shit.... you just get worried on what to say next that rhymes/.....

PeAcE oUt~~~~~

Well Return tha fava!!\/ \/ \/ \/

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