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Old 10-19-04, 11:10 AM   #7
Terse.
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Voted For: Spite

aight,
Plutonium, ya verse was okay...but your punches were lackin, they didnt hit hard enough...u didnt have any personals or multies either...the only thing that stood out as bein good was the structure...keep elevatin...

Spite, def not a bad verse...u didnt seem to have personals either but u had multis n your punches were a lil mo creative...ya structure coulda used some work, but overall u had good consistency....

V/ Spite, fo mo overall creativity