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Old 10-19-04, 03:58 PM   #24
Parallel
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..kontroverzey..:
k that was tight dawg nice punches hit hard man...but yes you had vocabulary haha that was rank fuck you pulled out a stone cold be time ass kicken haha on him haha...jk but ya that was dope...nice vocab and punches flowed nicly...stucture needed work but...

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not bad dawg but it coulda came harder dawg...you had nice stucture and it flowed but stucture needed work tho...maybe try adding more of complicated vocab in there i seen a little but thats easy shit try complicated shit no one should no make them look it up in the dictionary lol...

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