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Old 10-19-04, 06:28 PM   #6
Joe Punchline
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This bitch callin out ''noobs'' claimin its to help them elevate..
we all know u just like to swing ya lil girl punches at a ''lightweight''..*
WACK

u couldnt handle a nigguh who can 'dictate' a way the battle goes..
'playmate' pornos an rapin ya right hand is the only time u ever see 'hoes'..
Wow, wack as hell

ask this lil ''brit'', he'll admit he's a virgin...
your the winner emergin? ha! thats like sayin you had sex for the first time when your foreskin was removed by the surgeon!
NO

awww, i just kid, you aint no fuckin jew....
but while we ownin up, just tell the people, your gay arent you? (haha)
Wtf, omg that was horrible

fuckin homo with the intellegience of a fish...
cause after about 6 seconds he forgets who the fuck hes gotta diss!**
Where is the punch??

dumbass think fast...
cause ya suckin up to everybody will prove ''nice guys finish last''..
Umm sorry but HELL NO

check the forecast, its a potential lyrical downpour...
an on top of all of that, ''kate'' is the town whore!!..***
Yo ur punches are so weak

naw, i aint that heartless but me n her did have an affair..
long term relationship? when she was on my dick she didnt seem to care!..
So basic, wtf, wheres the vocab, wordplay, and the fuckin punch?

like xzibit she wanted me to choke her spank her an pull her hair!...****
but all these personals cant be fair.....
Wow.. thas all im gonna say, WOW

so i'll sit back n chill, an anticipate ya verse...
but ugggh, 6 fuckin hours?! what do ya wanna do kid? rehearse?!?...
You are so wack

why cant u be an average emcee n just rhyme...
o sorry i forgot, ''mums'' callin your ''sweet ass'' for ''teat time''..!*****
KILL URSELF

Overall- Possibly one of the worst verses ive read in like a year.. Nuthing in this, no punches.. and if there were they were so basic.. Awful verse.. id rip the living daylights outta u, but thats beside the fact.. please up ur game or quit rapping

Kids a battlin machine, obviously time to Kill...
Cuz you can come back with fiya...
................But you shoulda come back with skill...
HELL NO

Dreams of facin me & getin a lesson, his dream was true...
So didn't bother going to class...
.........................cuz he just woke up schooled...
Wtf was this??

100% HaTeRpRoOf but people do till have beef...
But the way you smoke down the blunt...
............You must be near the end of the leaf..
No punch

Council on the upp got a sponsor in Nike...
But your no welcome...
....Cus they're throwin you a rope, to take a hike*...
Hike and Nike dont rhyme by the way u fuckin herb.. u suck, theres nothing in this whole bar worth even fuckin taking a shit on

See this herb get served, in rap your straight worthless...
.D|O|P|E|M|A|N. The self proclaimed King...
..............but of what son, Wack Verses...
If u had this in ur "rhyme book" i wouldnt even wipe my ass with it

Lines gettin stretched so bring punches for the Crammin...
Bobs bouncing to my beat...
............... Just look at the way were Jammin...**
KILL URSELF

Overall- Horrible.. i will stop there

Winner- Arch wins.. since he didnt have as many bars as the other cat that were wack.. this was horrible tho.. my eyes are watering this was so bad, im gonna go throwup, uggghhhh DISGUSTING
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