aight man this was nice....flowed good but your structure is horrible work on that like even out your lines..saw some vocab and wordplay nice but you coulda put more in than what u had most was elementry but on the real nice drop keep em commin....
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post some feedback in one of my open mic's or ina battle or vote w/e you want but vote honestly and explained is all i ask..

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