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Old 10-19-04, 07:57 PM   #26
Insight.
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This was feedback posted for punchline king

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just seein who voted for hd.

i really dont feel like goin through my whole votin thing but i can say punch u got this. u had attempts at wordplay but thats it. u need to reword some of your stuff cuz u had good ideas, just bad wordin

HD u need to elevate dawg. "if gunna beat dsa shit out diz whitenigger//
like eminem biatch ur a fuckin wigger//" u said the same thing twice. wigger= white nigger. u self glorified and your verses r too elementary

overall punch your verse wuz better u need to work on elevatin.

no hate