Voted For: Myth

Damn... Myth killed with all the personals/punches... a very one-sided battle here.

Verbal:
records better than mine. but whos bitchin? when ya rep is smitten.
i guess ma text aint hittin. or ya battlin dopes without blessed prewrittens.

hmmm... set-up was cool but then she dissed herself and ended the line kinda wack

cause i only key to vets, i guess this battles just not my style.
ya living cause ya not the underdog. unlike me, ya jock survival.

ehhh.. nothing happening here... didn't rhyme either.... pretty forced

ya internet beefin. ya couldnt be decent orally, so ya fax jokes.
the open mic links in ya siggy arent links. ya must be that dope.

wack

this verse is hatred. from start to mission statement, ya once rhymed.
youd like to think ya made profit, but ya just elevating front lines.

no punch... what was the point of this line?

i shoulda dropped 8 lines, so ya had a chance to come through with a win.
youd like to think ya place is safe in this race, but ya just pacing us fems.

good closer but that's about all ya had going for ya in this one... the whole verse shoulda been on this level.


10 minute, quick key...

...this kid had been bitching about me not checking in all week, ive dropped now, i he hasnt even checked. how ironic. pz.

good point^^...lol


MYTH:
ducked the first battle so u could prewrite, verse needed practice *
3-3 what happened to u being a vet, u shouldn't of changed ya tactics *
verbal beating me is like leg amputee's performing numerous back flips

good opener...watch the line stretching, though...kinda threw me off at first going with 3 lines as opposed to 2

afraid to drop? fronting saying u were busy with the natural selection *
a buttaface? i saw ya pictures, ya beat, but is that ya actual complection *

more personals... again, ya lines seemed a bit stretched

verbal abuse..naw? i rather hit the next level, domestic violence *
talent? nope abuse skills don't exist like cops arresting pirates

set-up was good but ya ended this line kinda flat...

doubts? u even said it ya self that the dickless can't be hard *
va's talent couldn't stand out if she was in a camp full of retards

again, good set-up but ya ended kinda soft... finish with a punch instead of love taps

sex..naw? i paid attention in health, i rather stay away from the clap
structure problems, va's lines stretch farther then ones on subway maps

ehhh...ok... what's sex gotta do with ya follow-up line? ya lines and punches should lead into each other... seems like ya just wanted sum'n to rhyme here

ya career's plunging fast like jamicans running down a steep hill racing
claim u hot, ya couldn't come sick if ya skills were fat people embracing

worst line ya dropped so far...no connection... no punch

rumors? naw the speculations are true, u sent ya pictures to one-man-band *
va showing skill would shock peeps like muhammad ali performing hand stands

closer coulda been better ...

i noticed a pattern here... ya set-ups are golden but then ya end all of ya lines flat... and wussup with all the questions at the beginning of each line? stay away from doing that so much...it's a little annoying... work on ya structure... ya lines seemed to stretch... not a lot but it's still noticeable... the thing that saved you in this battle was the tons of personals ya threw in there... work on connecting ya punches and finishing stronger and you'll be the shyt... keep at it

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