Dopeman
best line:
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ask this lil ''brit'', he'll admit he's a virgin...
your the winner emergin? ha! thats like sayin you had sex for the first time when your foreskin was removed by the surgeon!
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even though the structure got a lil sloppy towards the end, unless would just be spittin that all fast?
but i especially like the "this 'lil brit' " nice wordplay
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so i'll sit back n chill, an anticipate ya verse...
but ugggh, 6 fuckin hours?! what do ya wanna do kid? rehearse?!?...
why cant u be an average emcee n just rhyme...
o sorry i forgot, ''mums'' callin your ''sweet ass'' for ''teat time''..!
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im english myself but that was some cold shit
worst line:
this whole section
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awww, i just kid, you aint no fuckin jew....
but while we ownin up, just tell the people, your gay arent you? (haha)
fuckin homo with the intellegience of a fish...
cause after about 6 seconds he forgets who the fuck hes gotta diss!**
dumbass think fast...
cause ya suckin up to everybody will prove ''nice guys finish last''..
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the jew part i get, but it was a lil uneccesary.
the fish part just let your flow down, i get your point and where your going with it but, nah. it didnt really work
Archeologist
best lineS:
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So didn't bother going to class...
.........................cuz he just woke up schooled...
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wow, that there is some nice play, i was impressed
Quote:
See this herb get served, in rap your straight worthless...
.D|O|P|E|M|A|N. The self proclaimed King...
..............but of what son, Wack Verses...
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another strong attack, but on a level from 1 arch to another, when your battling you need to get more on the aggressive, your flow is very good maybe if there were more personals, and it was a lil longer it'd be GREAT
worst line:
[QUOTE] 100% HaTeRpRoOf but people do till have beef...
But the way you smoke down the blunt...
............You must be near the end of the leaf..
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personal:yes
effective:no
who puts leaves in blunts? i thought its sticlty buds in the '04?
My winner: Dopeman
Dopeman, because he came out far more aggressive and landed a lot of critical hits with his personals, not all of his flow was watertight though and there was oppurtunity for arch to win, so D-man betta twerk on that. Arch, you did very well and it or not it was hard to judge, keep @ it because you are good, just need to gear it up.
-Arch Out