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Old 10-20-04, 08:57 AM   #6
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This was good shit. What I took from it, was that so many human beings base their whole lives trying to get into this place called heaven, while there is no proof that it actually exists. So why do we bother trying to recieve our way in at all..

The last bit was killer..

ve just been convinced we must atone
Though the messiah’s unlisted
I dialed the digits
But religion didn’t pick up the phone


That there, basically put everything into context for me. And unfortunatly I dont have much to critacise from this.. So Ill ask you to just keep dropping good poetry like this and stay up brutha.
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