Voted For: Adrenaline

Emcee:genocide

Verse:
...Exposin the facts on this wack trash..wit EASE i'm takin the win
Cuz Adrenaline is just a fake fuck...like hand jobs from the Olsen Twins...
...Crush ur pride in u hidin behind the board...afraid to attempt rappin
...Crush ur pride in u hidin behind the board...afraid to attempt rappin
Compilating all of ur battles...wit dreams of ur text album goin platinum..
...Not happenin..and after my first bar...RV seen your true side man
Who woulda knew that u polish more sticks than the White Lotus Clan?..


now I'm doper than this geek.. this will just prove it true dude
That I can use your style, way fucking better than you do...
And sure I'm getting better, but I'm not really trying to boast...
But you spaced out the title...and still we're not even that close!
And Adrenaline use to be a stupid guy, how liked guys.
Now he's gained knowledge and realized.
that he wasnt that ill.

Comments:i think you took this...one sided battle...the other guys verse was just not elevated...and i think that you bit this, im serious....look you copy and pasted twice look
"...Crush ur pride in u hidin behind the board...afraid to attempt rappin
...Crush ur pride in u hidin behind the board...afraid to attempt rappin"

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Emcee:Adrenaline

Verse:
ayo I spit the artificial intelligence/wit pure evidence/
ur only superficial so u spit peer neglegence/
am a thug legend/that spits wit mugged weapons/
ill puncture ur brains IQ wit thugged lessons/
ill rip u apart like stonewalls/wit my incredible hulk claws/
I spit inedible rhymes that burn jaws/

Comments:i think you need to elevate,...go read some tutorials...i think they will help fill in your gaps...other wise i think that you lost...but since i think that guy bit im voting for you...

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im putting these "dont cares" because im simply voting for adrenaline because i think genocide bit..

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