iight good vocab that really stood out but the mood of the rack was conflicting from begging to end lemme elaborate..
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Originally Posted by Troop
I was Delivered from a Black 22 Year Old Vaginal Capacity
Whodini Tendencies at Age three u could call me Majesty
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^^ that bar had me feeliong like i was going into a Black Album type song ya know talkin bout how you grew up and shit.
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Originally Posted by Troop
Forever has this Consistence protrayed a day in the Life
Focused upon with Suspicion like ah Arabic in a Flight
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^^that bar switched the mood WAY too quickly from an introspective song to a hardcore song, that wasn't too cool
but overall for what you were aiming at you did a pretty good job, but yea flow can definatly be fixed up, and how deep you go into it needs to change a little also.
