damn man...that was truly a dope piece..very dope...i would of loved to see it a shade longer....maybe another 10 lines...a few to eac part..but this was dope..syllable count was damn near perfect..rhyme scheme was really good...choice of words was really good...story was realy good...and message was superb...this is a good cantidate for OM of the month....no joke...keep bangin bro...

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