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Old 10-20-04, 08:07 PM   #14
Parallel
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Voted For: Wicked One

Maku Jaiiliin:
iight you had nice flow but your stucture was fucked lol...your punche swerent that good eather did come hard enoguh they were iight but i dont understand how your winning...but..you need work on wordplay also but not to many people on rv and rb use it so...try working with vocabulary it gives a depth a better chance to win...

Wicked One:
k nice verse nice stucturre and it flowed nicly good vocabulary liked your verse a whole lot could be pretty dope in a few years you will be as me to we need to battle some time...also nice punches hit ahrd worked well nicely played you took this i felt...not no wordplay but that shits hard i know it but its hard to get..some multis hit hard tho you won...

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