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Old 10-20-04, 08:35 PM   #11
Terse.
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Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

i thought both of yall came real close on this one...
Frein, not a bad verse...no punches really stood out, but they were decent...your flow had an okay flow to it, but i aint likin the structure wit all those asterisks...but, overall, u did aight...

Kon, ya verse was aight too...structure was meh at the beginin, but it got better later on in the verse...punches were aight too...n u had a decent flow...

shit was mad close IMO...but i think kon got this by a hair, cuz the structure was a lil better.....no hate