Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

weak battle

frein...first thing I noticed is your focus on multies...they semmed forced a it took away from your verses strength big time...focus more on personals an punches anwordplay an you'll win more cuz your concepts were decent but you didn't develop them good enuff to make them hit....flow was good structure was solid just work n what I said an you'll be fine.


Kontro....your punches were somewhat stronger but not by much, your setups were lagging on some lines, but flow was cool an strucutre was alot better than what I've seen....complexity was fair...your verse was jus a lil harder hitting so I gave it to you.


Punches: kontro
Personals: kontro
Flow: frein
Structure:tie
Metas: kontro
Vote: kontro

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