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Old 10-21-04, 06:34 AM   #13
iamthatdude87
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aight wheh!!!!! those were long lol......anayways.....mad dogg urs had a gud story but i really didnt think it flowed but the vocabulary was there i liked the part of the situation but again it was just like reading from a story no flow....if u would of had it flow i think u wuld of had got it because both u had gud emotions and everything was there but i like nostros better gud work to both of u