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Old 10-21-04, 06:54 AM   #10
frein-ma$ter
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Originally Posted by ghetto cripple
Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

ok, kon fix your font. both of you need to clean you lines up, leave the hit ata the end of the line, so we now where lines end.

kon had more hits and more knowledgable usage of his talent, keep up the work and keep practicing.

fein.... i feel like im tellin alot of ppl this cuz none of ya are good, but doo like i did and take time off to practice your flo learn more about your surroundings and use it, learn how yo rhyme things that dont seem to rhyme dont be a easy rhymeer like " chumps and bumps" try things like " power" with "endowed with" flo with it and you will get wat im saying.

kon get this one


loll sry but i dont take advice from newbs....uppin