yo, i can tell u used fruity loops to make this, cuz u useing the defualt sounds, get sum new samples to go in it and u shud be able to get away with it, also change the beat a bit more, and make it obvious where the hook is supposed to be, i cudn;t tell. other tan that good luck, i started out with fruity loops, and now i got sum what me and my m8s consider hot beats, and i ain't got no hardware or nuttin.

peace TALV