~SoBeR iS oVeRaTeD~
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IP:
Voted For: genocide
Lemem lay it down
im watchin u like a sitcom/nothin but laughter/
ur like a boring book/I cant even read the first chapter/
^^Best example of how whack your verse was. No mulitples, no metaphores worth mentioning. WEak verses. Toatlly friggin wack
IP:
Man, ya not a challenge but worse of all I'll murder you
Fuck punches hows this for a personal,
....................I've never heard of you!
^^Not a bad beggining, led to better things. Not great but better than taht other ma fuckas. Punches made more sense, sounded less forced.
Vote-Genocide
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