Voted For: ..kontroverzey..
Emcee:...Kontroverzey...
Verse:
Master? your highly over-ratin' your abil-ities Kid Spits Garbage, Yet tries to keep his city-clean...
Dawg Im Spittin' Gilliteens, Your Linez are more re-used then Mcdonalds cups In poor facilities...
Punch-lines Pop you in both-eyes, Have your vision blury like it was not easy for you to stay sober...
Like bad cooks imma leave dis kid baked-over, have dis battle advertized more den celebritity make-over's...
Like pissed off wivez I'm di-shen Objects,leave this chicken cooked, Tonight I'm havin' chi-cken selects...
No Vampire, but my lines straight rippen ya neck, Dump your body, have the Wolves Li-cken your flesh...
Winnin' I object like a shitty case, Nines'll Blow your "top" off Like a Windy days..
Gotta double barrel lookin for a double date, have you steppin back like mee-tin gays..
Don't mean jail when i say your times up, like the tower of pizza your lifes hangin side-ways...
Spittin Flamez on your ass, have you runnin coverin your ass like in jail showers standin beside gays
Comments

k i think you took this by having more consistant and harder hitting punches...a few metas here and there and nice structure.
Marks:
Wordplay - 6/10
Metas - 7/10
Vocabulary - 6/10
Structure - 7/10
Punches - 8/10
Opener - 7/10
Closer – 7/10
Personals – 6/10
Enjoyment – 6/10
Creativity - 5/10
Overall - 65/100
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Emcee:Frein-Ma$ter
Verse:
..You beat me last time but thats 'not what it meant'..this is ur descent..i ll jump over u cuz ur skills are only good once a month like 'Paying Rent'..(KO)
..You think your frein master? I believe ur murked cuz everyone can see your only a 'substitution-of-knock' like 'The-Invention-Of-Doorbells'..(its ova)
..Your talent? I’m choosing-to-mod-it-with-lancers cuz the 'closet you’ll get to hotness is moving-to-tropic-of-cancers..I’ll open your chest and ask for answers, but nope cuz the only time 'Yo Land A/Yolanda twist' is 'Middle-Western-Dancers'..
..I've beat those chumps.. now his facial area has never seen more bumps..ya flipped sideways cuz now i 'got ya feet in the air' like 'reebok pumps'..
Comments

k i think tht you lost this becuse of your structure and it took a while to read...not good.. when your listening to music you dont wanna rewind it and find out what someone said...
Marks:
Wordplay - 7/10
Metas - 5/10
Vocabulary - 6/10
Structure - 4/10
Punches - 5/10
Opener - 6/10
Closer – 6/10
Personals – 5/10
Enjoyment – 4/10
Creativity - 6/10
Overall - 54/100
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