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Voted For: Bizzey
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i dont see nothin special about u, no creativity or stylish complexity
in my book, son....u only git one star--like u a Child of Destiny
^^ Best line in the verse. Not bad, good strucutre, decent punches, a few were off the mark. Some played shit liek the spit fire line. FLow was aiight 6/10
The whole multi second part on bizzey was ill. I dunno why u changed your structure. Sumthin ain't feel right. Anyway yeah punches connect the FIrst part hled most of em. Good verse bad structure in second half.
7/10
Good battle keep goin ya'll
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