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Old 10-21-04, 08:59 PM   #8
Know-Gimix
The Ups and Downs of Life
 
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Originally Posted by In-Vision
As I close my eyes and try to relax, I drift off, escape-ism..
where mothers keep babies and fathers don't rape women..
I'm floating, feeling weightless, but i'm still grounded..
zoned out, when the music stops, my hearts still poundin..
In unconsious patterns showin signs of music in the soul..
people hate me,regardless all i can do in return, is console..
sometimes i lose my grip and my life spirals out of control..
and deciphering reality becomes my one and only goal..
when life has turned for the worst good memories evaporate..
I just pray i reach you through this ink, drop the gun, lets clap the hate..



that openin parry got me real interested.... this shit is straight fire... Im still readin it, but you got excellent flow for text, You should start doin audios-- Nice lines, I usually dont enjoy reading text but ur shit was entertaining... keep droppin fammyz.... oh yeah it got better
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