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Old 10-21-04, 10:15 PM   #9
ghetto cripple
bringin' new thoughts to the name disability-flossed in tight wear shiny shoes you feelin' me
 
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze

d fury: i liked the dick tracy line, bringin it back. and i liked the source award line nice diss and the last line was mad crazy. but the tyson line not feelin at all tyson has been played out also tyson bit evander not evander bitin tyson
"If you ever spit I'd hear you bittin' like Evander did Tyson..."

jr:came great with rhymin different words like anatomy with handedly syringes and ninja's i could keep goin but you did that through the whole verse very impressive, i liked the stars and ninja line heavy wiehgt line was aight.

overall i like the way you both presented your line structure very clean and undersandable.
you both did great but just felt jr's a lil more, but d yours was tight, i cant get over your ending line very good but the tyson line was off, but again very good.
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