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Old 10-22-04, 03:29 AM   #12
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
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Voted For: *Troop*

Damn good battle yalll.
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Sabotage's opener-
"if anyone say that you sick they formed it as a question
you say the best left, get it right I'm still present"-not really a punch just self glorification 4/10
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your best line-"Youre already under my steps, so you cant be too far in the game"
"Call me Ali cause ima knock you out and have you seeing stars like ya name"-nice personal lil bit off target but still good 7/10
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closer-"Troop awhile ago vanquished the ‘E.R.’
But not even intensive care will help heal these bars"-another self glorification not bad though ima give it 5/10
.16/30
advise-work on you structure and your punches your kinda like me i used to put self glorification shit in my battles to...me and you have the same type of style Direct...but i lost alot of battles doin that shit two and so will you, take them out..
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Troops Opener-Attention to the Whole "Comitee of the Wisemen" crew full of No Faced
I'll "Sabotage' Your Entire Affiliation of Records that Arent "Show Cased"-great opener nice word play good personal direct punch 8/10
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You best line-Im Eraseing your Attempts to Defeat "T" Stop Proposing the Stakes,
Your Not Dangerous like Wearing Cinderblocks and Sprinting on Frozen Lakes-funny shit there man good word play kinda personal 6/10
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closer-Dimensions of Determination Failed like Pigeon toed Kids
with a Straight Foot,
Allowing "Mimesis" to Deliver u Testicular Kisses your Far From "Str8 Hood"-this is what won it for you....damn...good multi good word play exelent punch and personal 8/10
.22/30
advise-none really just work on you punches a lil and your structure.....
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I Vote Troop.....please return the favor with an unbias vote on my battle with Blackwell on the FL...Holla
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Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
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