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Old 10-22-04, 06:42 AM   #32
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From: decatur ga
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Voted For: sabotage

sabotage took diz hands down...
i culdnt even work out diz other guyz flow, dat structure is horrible fien...
puns, structure an personals all go to sabotage
an without decent structure, puns n personals, ya verse is pointless....

frien, work on structure, cause ya rhyme scheme is so fucked up, i had to read it 3 times before i culd figure dat shit out
an thats not good, thats not good at all...
major flaw

so sabotage got diz
no hate
an return da fave vs keyz cuz its my first ever battl an i need 2 kno if itz iight or whakked