The Watcher
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Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN
aight,
Villian, ya verse was straight...ya structure was on point n the overall flow was good...i saw that u didnt have any personals, but u had a good amount of multis...none of your punches really stood out, nah'mean, but there were still witty n u were consistent wit them...
X-felon, ya verse coulda used some work...there werent any personals or multis that i saw, n the punches were short of bein decent...overall i didnt see much creativity from u...n ya structure was horrible yo...u should hit 'enter' every time u finish a line instead of leavin it a big paragraph...keep elevatin tho...
V/ Supevillian, for more creativity n better structure...
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