bringin' new thoughts to the name disability-flossed in tight wear shiny shoes you feelin' me
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Voted For: RED BEAM
red beam first: shows good talent with rhymin "list" and "wreckless" also "game over" with "flame thrower", did well with bringin everything around him to this battle an example: using "konttroverzey"''s name and workin with "flip" and "game over" thing was very creative, and the structure was great very readible and understandable.
logistic: seemed to rhyme simple most of the time through, "done" with "son" also "race" and "tast" and i did not like at all how he said "candle" twice and didnt understand the
"Control yourlfow better than a fucking roman candle."
wasnt feelin it. the structure was good.
summary: read beam came hard with evry line, logic had some that were just plain had no core and not hard at all like this one
"Whys Six afraid of Seven? Because Seven "ATE" Nine,
Whys "Red Beam" afraid of me? Cuz, he knows he cant rhyme."
thats just stupid, no disrespect intended, cause ive done it before,and also at the end of your verse you said this
"I think that was pretty good.. i guess...."
i guess! what the fuck is that you dont say that about yourself, you have to believe that you shit is good cause if you showin doubt in ya own work then that shows readers that you might not have come your hardest so why vote for him, you have to make ppl believe your good, cause that exactly what tupac did, he made sure you believed evry damn word he said, and we did.
overall it goes to read beam.
good battle
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Battle's
openmic
WINS
killuminatic K.O.
Big Woody K.O.
Da Solution 5-1
Big Woody 5-2
LOSSES
killuminatic K.O.
Da Jokah K.O.
Whiskey 5-2
dawgfatha_13 5-3
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