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Old 10-22-04, 06:19 PM   #8
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Voted For: Verbal Vision

Verbal..... you have this,......

I like your flow.... I cna really understand your flow as i read along.... Your rhymes are really Nice too....

Your punches were pretty good.... you could have came harder with some of them...... but i still liked em... Good job with them.....

Your structuer was pretty sweet ..... i dont think any were too short or too long.... I like it....

You wordplay........ I like it.... I had to look up Distraught... lol ... I am really feelin the wordplay.....

warrior.....

I liked... your punches a little but verbal cam e harder here.....

Your flow was alright .... you and Verbal were the same here...

U didnt really like your structure.... some of your linez were streched......

Over all...... Verbal got this right here.......

Peace~~~~...

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