Voted For: Malefic

Malefic
nice personals the whole drop was like one big personal
ya punches were nice and original thats a plus
ya structure was good
u had some nice Multi's and Meta's
The personals and Punches helped u lotz

Li
i was especting alot more from u man
Ya structure was ok
ya punches werent really original and didnt hit
ya personals werent really there like they should
ya Multi's and Meta's werent really there eitheir
kinda seemed like u was jus talkin

this go's 2 Malefic much props kid
Li u gonna have 2 bring it harder than that
4 sumone thats supposed 2 be considered a Vet

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