Voted For: illuson

mercenary you need to structure your lines better for sure and you so called "battle diss" sounded to me more like straight bitchin, you aint hit worth shit, your flo is all fucked and choppy.

your hiits werent that hard, but everyone has there off day, you rhymed "get it" with "pathetic" i liked that it shows skill

mercenary last line sucked for a ender, you have yo kill with a last line and ill seems like he tried to.

i see illuson had one rhyme lines you should break that up so ppl can read it with more flow, like the first and last lines, it really helps,

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