^lol.....OMB u are so sinicle. im a newb i dont really ask ppl for help. sometimes i let them read a verse of mine and ask em for feedback before i drop it.
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…