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Better than you..
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IP:
Voted For: RED BEAM
decent battle.
L - your verse was not bad had alright flow and some decent internals. your vocab was alright but u coulda used more words instead of candles twice in one scheme. structure was good. punches were decent but not really ne personals. i seen a lotta of rhyming just for the sake of it. u need to turn that into good punches and incorporate personals in ya verse.
R - good drop. it had better vocab and stronger punches. why did u pull out all these other rappers names tho i wasnt feelin it. what was the point of that? besides that tho u had a stonger verse. structure was good, flowed well some multis thrown in there. good drop
Vote - Red Beam
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..ADLIB..
Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…
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