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Old 10-22-04, 10:48 PM   #15
For$akeN
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

lady fiya:nice opener pretty effective and done decently......
rest was not that great but decent at best I can say..........
yep you quickly keyed and i understand that so that didn't
help you much in the winning category but okay...
overall: 6.5/10

soul sickness: opener was not that great it was pretty played and not a good way to start a verse in my opinion.............
and you also came with a pretty large amount of self-glorification and weak lines....
overall: 5/10

vote: lady fiya
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