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Voted For: D Fury
this was pretty one sided but ima have to hand this one to my boi d-fury
Third
you had a pretty decent verse... it was pretty long ... some punchlines were decent some were just falling off... structure was decent.... personals were ugh cuz i really wasnt feelin any of them really ..overall nice verse but d-futy took this
d-fury
pretty dope verse...dawg..you had some nice punchlines... overall your structure was decent alittle better then third...your punchlines were hitting alot harder then thirds..personals were iight both were at a tie..but overall in structure..punchlines and creativity....d-fury took this
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