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Old 10-23-04, 01:30 AM   #12
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Voted For: saaran

This battle was pretty tight...nice wordplay and creativity from both but mostly saaran who had the better overall verse.
Saaran:
Claim ya runnin rv in text witcha vet status
you forget my text is rabid...
love to see how ass ya audio is... thats if you had it
^nice bar good structure and personal good creativity.
I'ma whiteboi squeaky voice, i know it, cuz y'all seen this
Quit fuckin wit rv stick to penis...
diss how i'm white when ya name yaself afta a caucasion genius
Kinda multy in there with goos personals again and a good punch.
no terms for played words, slowly killed ya cuz ya heard my sins
not bad 8 losses...had that by the time i had thirty wins
^Good personal AGAIN and good diss.
Glad you quit battlin, your verse more from a corny guy
Shit yo ass came back to rv to up your porn supply
This personal made me laugh I really liked it.

Overall saaran's verse was better for having nicer wordplay and packed with personals.

Socrates:
I hate this fuckin pussy, cuz damn hes not at my level
So imma torch his shit like he sat on a toilet for the devil
^Nice line,not too bad of a punch kind of an elementary diss though.
Saaran imma use you name against you, wrap you ho
Cuz fuck im on a mission, and youre still in a pueblo
^Wasn't feeling this line at all.Attempt at a personal but it came rather weak.Couldve been better with some rewording.
Ill hit you below the belt, so when i aimed way down south
I swung and hit lips, and im NOT saying i hit you in the mouth
Worst bar of ther battle I think, crappy punch and personal.
Fuck hes a whack everything. although he tries to fake it
Rhymes his softer than a pillow,so he should take his verse and blanket
^Kinda played out but well thought out, one of your best lines.
Im smashing you head in sliding glass doors, fuckin nympho
So ill show you to the door for your loss, and take the win-dow
^Good closer, good wordplay for that one.

Ive seen socrates come wayy harder in his other battles so I was kind of disapointed.Nice verse from both though keep doing your thing.

V/ saaran.
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