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Old 10-23-04, 01:34 AM   #16
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

kind of weak battle from Soul Sickness,your shit was played and basic.
Lady Fiya, that was good for a 5 minute drop. I liked your lin about his record and the other 2 nbars after that.Your verse after that got weaker but it was still dope.
Soul you need to work on your structure and try to use more personals in your verse.Dont be scared to make up witty wordplay and your punches need some work also.
Props to both.
V/Lady Fiya
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