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Old 10-23-04, 02:22 AM   #15
For$akeN
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Voted For: Socrates

socrates: i didn't see any self-glorification and thats good
punches were straight but i don't really think you tried....
last line was pretty dope but it was a tad self-glorified at
the very end but it had nice wordplay...............
overall: 7/10

saaran: decent verse in my opinion nothing special
you talked about yourself a lot and you kept on saying your white for some odd reason I will never figure out maybe.....
punches got played close to the end of your verse and wasn't
as effective as socrates so by those facts I vote for...

socrates....
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