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Old 10-23-04, 07:12 AM   #20
Terumoto
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Voted For: Nostradamus

Mad Dog:
FUUUUUCK! I actually feel sorry for you on this one..
your verse was so wack!
and by wack I mean DOPE! .. . . .. But yeah.. had a nice plot.. Good flow.. Well done convo paragraph.. nice twist at the end.. A couple lines could have been worded better but meh..
I thought nos was like.. losing till i read his.. thats why i feel sorry for ya.. good verse but still a loss.. damn...

NOS: shut the fuck up with your dope vocab and neat structure and such... OK.. WE KNOW YOUR GOOD... god damn.. The way you took on this topic was hella unique... Flow was good with lots nice assonance n even some multis.. nice verse

Good battle.. but v/ = nos
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