Voted For: teken.

Sortin shit out.....

record equals "0-3" thats your record bitch you can't "beat me"
i'm untouchable i wont run away and you still wont be able to "reach me"
^^Good opening. Rest of verse was ok not played pretty origanl but not great. unches were ok and flow was good. Good structure. I like da mattee who line. 6/10

leave ya with more chins than a chinese FONEBOOK//i got more RYHMEZ than a CHINESE RESTURANT's got cats to COOK
^^Best line but first part is SOOOO played i ain't even funny. Simplisitc and reheated is the onyl way i can describe the rest of the verse. Not a personal in there just a bunch of off beat swings. STUCTURE SUCKED and rhyme sceme was off in places. 4/10

Nice battle

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