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Old 10-23-04, 09:52 AM   #24
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Voted For: Wrecker

Word. Dopeman your elevating a lot since the last time I read your battles. However, I do think Wrecker took this. He had some well thought out punches, he did lack in personals, but he made up for it with his disses.

Dopeman, like I said, you are gettin better bro, but you still need to work on connecting your punches and making them hit harder. See like with your first bar, you started off good, but you should of done a punch playing off something that goes with a highest order instead of leaving it alone and moving onto new disses in the same bar. If you understand what I mean...

Some lines were good, but needed to be worded better also.. But you are getting better then before. Keep elevating to both. But my vote has to go to Wrecker.

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