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frein i liked some of the punches you had but your structure killed your verse it was in paragraphs instead of bars and tht hurt your verse it would have been alot better if you would have shortened the lines and you might have gotten this battle... iknoevel had some dope bars and others were just average but his structure was good and his punches were more witty and harder hitting
v/ iknoevel
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